Sunday, September 22, 2019

xalia's and maddys dream things

                                                 hi te hiringa did not make this me and maddy just did this for fun xalia and maddy's dream things and maddy has this on her  blog to  enjoy this on my blog and on maddy's blog  enjoy this!!!!!!!!!!!!

5 comments:

  1. Kia ora I,m Max from Yaldhurst Model School. I enjoyed the part when you said what your dream waterpark was. did you think about putting any other dream things. Next time, you could say some more dream things. Where would the dream waterpark be. Goodbye from Max.

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  2. KIa ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way you added a dream hat. Did you think putting shoes. Next time, you could add colourful backgrounds instead of black.

    Regards, Zahrah

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  3. Hi xalia, its Kade
    You may or may not know me.
    Very interesting did you do it for work?
    Good job maybe next time you could
    name the things.
    Kind regards
    Kade

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  4. Kia ora Xalia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I liked the way you put Madison's ideas in as well as your own.

    This reminded me of when I looked at a blog post about financial literacy.

    To improve, you could also add more writing and make your own pictures maybe.

    Why did you decide to blog about this in your own time?

    Bye Xalia! Cya later!

    -Amelia 😉

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  5. Kia ora Xalia, I'm Laura from Yaldhurst Model School.
    I liked the way you put Madison's ideas in as well as your own.
    This reminded me of when I watched the youtubers on the hats and blankets.
    To improve, you could also add more writing and make your own pictures maybe.
    why did you write a blog about this?
    Kind regards Laura:);)

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