this week te hiringa had to agree or disagree of if it is wrong to fight at school and i choosed to aggree that it is wrong to fight this is my work enjoy it!!
Kia ora, I,m Max from Yaldhurst model school. I enjoyed the part when you said thatyou agreed becasue that is goood. Did you think about what the dangers would be. Next time youcould add in a few ,more sentences. what would you do if you saw someone fighting i the playground. Goodbye from Max.
Kia Ora I'm Alvin from YMS I really liked how you said those funny things how they can punch your theeth out did you think about using some pictures? to improve you could make the letters a bit bigger because I can't really see it will you fight back if somone punches you?
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you said you agree that it is wrong to fight at school.
Did you think about looking to see if there were any spelling mistakes.
Next time, you could write a little bit more, and add capital letters.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)
Kia Ora I am Mykiala from yaldhurst Model School year 5.
ReplyDeleteI liked reading about fighting.
Next time I think you should read the doc thing because some of it does not make any sence.
Great job anyway.
Kind regards -
Mykiala!!!
Kia ora, I,m Max from Yaldhurst model school. I enjoyed the part when you said thatyou agreed becasue that is goood. Did you think about what the dangers would be. Next time youcould add in a few ,more sentences. what would you do if you saw someone fighting i the playground. Goodbye from Max.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora I'm Alvin from YMS I really liked how you said those funny things how they can punch your theeth out did you think about using some pictures? to improve you could make the letters a bit bigger because I can't really see it will you fight back if somone punches you?
ReplyDeleteAlvin.